But beyond Martina's resourceful blog and her supportive Twitter feed, I'd like to introduce you to Martina the incredibly talented writer and my insightful and caring critique partner (yes, I'm so lucky!). Having been a fan of Martina's online world, I got to know the real person when I read one of her manuscripts -- and was blown away. I will tell you, honestly, a comment I gave her after reading her story -- "I cannot wait until this gets published so I can create a fan blog for it!"
Seriously. It's that good. And I do not say this lightly when I say that Martina reminds me of JK Rowling. She knows how to work with mythology, complex themes, and subtext (oh-my-god SUBTEXT!) to tell a fun and compelling story.
I was thrilled when Martina's lovely short story, "Bringing Lula Home," was chosen along with mine to be included in BelleBooks' newest collection of Southern-style short stories, Sweeter Than Tea, that released this week. You'll absolutely love Martina's story of reconciliation, long-hidden family secrets, and a woman's triumph in reclaiming the art buried in her own heart.
So, please, join with me today in welcoming Martina as she shares her wisdom on creating an intriguing, full world for your characters to inhabit. (And believe me, can Martina world-build).
Also, one lucky commenter will receive a copy of Sweeter Than Tea. So, make your voices heard!
World-building: The Hooks of
Magic in Your Book
By
Martina Boone
One of the things that J.K. Rowling does best with
her Harry Potter books is the way that she twists and incorporates classic
mythology to create something new. Myths have undoubted power. Tapping into
them is a great way to add heart and depth to a modern story because, over
time, the power of myth has burned into the human dna.
As Joseph Campbell, perhaps the best known writer on
the subject of mythology, put it:
"Myths
are public dreams, dreams are private myths."
When we write at our best and most enduring, I am
convinced, we are writing our own personal spin on a myth. The deeper the myth
and the more we embellish it, the truer it becomes. And at its core, fiction is
truth. Unless we make a story true, we cannot make it readable.
So what is truth in fiction? Emotion. That is the
real power of myth: honest emotion shown in a way that others can understand
and relate to their own experiences.
We all know there are only a handful of stories in
the world. What sets them apart are:
- the craft and the artistry with which they are told
- the timing in which they are delivered, and
- the characters that bring them to life.
To paraphrase what Susan said in her wonderful
guest post this week on the Adventures in YA Publishing blog, the truth is
in the details. That is why we have to spend time on world-building. Whether we
are writing fantasy or southern literature, paranormal or mystery, our
characters must inhabit complete worlds populated by other round characters.
They must all interact in interesting locations brought to life by unique and
identifiable music, food, weather, clothing—all the trappings of actual life. In
order to create a living, breathing book, we have to also create community, a place where readers want to
move in and stay a while.
Here is another quote from Joseph Campbell:
"I don't believe people are looking for the meaning of life as much as they are looking for the experience of being alive.”
What does that really mean? What is the experience of being alive in a book? It is the
experience of what it means to be the
characters in that book. It means that we aren't simply showing the action. We
are making the reader experience it along with
the characters. To do so, we invoke what the character's see, smell, hear,
taste, touch, feel. And we make that unique. That's what Jo
Rowling does best. She makes her world and her stories unique but universal at
the same time. She taps into the power of myth to reach the deepest truth and
build the truest fictional world.
Think about some of her most powerful images:
- The boy with the thunderbolt on his forehead. Thanks to mythology, we all equate the thunderbolt with the strongest gods.
- The boy in the closet under the stairs. As a symbol, this has great power. Not only is he metaphorically "in the closet" – with his true self hidden, but he is at the basest part of the house, at the very bottom with nowhere to go but up. He lives in the dark, he lives as a servant. She's told us all of that in one sentence: "Harry was used to spiders, because the cupboard under the stairs was full of them, and that was where he slept."
In her HARRY POTTER FOR WRITERS book, Susan Sipal does a
brilliant job likening Harry Potter to the Hero's Journey story structure, and
that is, of course, the classic mythic structure. As Susan put it, "To put it simply--the Hero’s Journey is
the story plot which has lasted the longest because it strikes a basic,
universal human chord of truth. Thus the Hero’s Journey is the archetypal
outline for a blockbuster plot."
I couldn't agree
more. I've based my own plot
complications worksheet on the turning points in the Hero's Journey, and I
love using that as a basis for getting my thoughts in order. But the Hero's
Journey structure is only the beginning. It gives us the framework within which
to weave our stories, and we do that
by creating the most meaningful, interesting details we can possibly come up
with and melding them together to make a new and vivid pattern.
Don't make the mistake of thinking that a kick-ass
plot and some bits of mythology or symbolism are going to turn your opus into
the next HARRY POTTER. What makes
J.K. Rowling (and every other bestselling author) so successful is the
specificity of the world-building. Tap into this in your own work by using
hooks.
Susan identified "the hook" as another aspect
of Rowling's success. She applied it to character:
"One technique JKR utilizes to make each individual stand out unique from the others is to give each character a hook; a description, personality trait, or association which defines him or her and distinguishes them from everyone else. A hook is one of the earliest and simplest tools to help familiarize your reader with your character. Simply put, a hook is something the reader can hang their memory on, that helps them, especially in the early stages of your story, remember who that character is and what their place is in your world."
In my own writing, I have recently discovered that I can apply hooks to
every aspect of my work. I am becoming convinced that each world, each
fictional community, each character, each location, each chapter, each page in the book should have a hook.
- World: What sets your world apart from every other world? What makes it different than our world? What makes is more wonderful? More horrible? More terrifying? More beautiful?
- Community: What sets this group of friends or co-conspirators apart from the norm? What brings them together into a cohesive unit? What makes this "group" something that your readers will want to belong to? What is the hook on which this community is based?
- Character: What is the most memorable thing about your character? What distinguishes him or her from every other character? Physically? Personality-wise? In background? Include a hook for each.
- Location: What is the most memorable thing about your setting? Your overall setting? Your scene settings? Include a hook for every place, and include things that your characters can interact with to "set" the mood and location in the reader's mind.
- Chapter: What happens in each chapter that is unique? What is the one-sentence take-away and how did you make it memorable?
- Page: Is there a detail of character, setting, scene, or community that is memorable and alive?
World-building is easier said than done. I think it is probably the most
difficult thing to do. The artistry in it comes not from including overwhelming
details, but from selecting the most telling details. In choosing the details
that will best convey the hook to the reader, and then by artistically showing
different facets of the hook to set it in the reader's mind.
Think of tapping into the power of myth as the structure of the story
you are weaving, and use the hooks of your characters, settings, community, and
so on as the threads that create a vivid and detailed tapestry. When you put the
warp and weft all together, you will have something unique and enduring.
Every story is
different, even when they are the same at heart. As Susan and I both have short
stories in the SWEETER THAN TEA anthology that just came out this week, I will
use that as an example. The prompt for that was to write stories in southern settings that make you want to prop your feet up, sip a cold glass of sweet iced tea, and lose yourself in a way of life that exists between the pages of How It Was and How It Might Have Been—just a little bit south of the long path home. The thirteen stories in the collection couldn't be more
different though. And each has its own cast of memorable characters and a setting
that's unique and vivid.
So you see, there is world-building even in the world of southern fiction. There is world-building in memorable fiction everywhere. Just find your hooks and use them to weave your story.
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Susan here - I can't tell you what a thrill I get from seeing myself quoted in the same post as the great Joseph Campbell! :-)
Thanks so much for sharing with us, Martina. And everybody, the few of you who haven't already, be sure to visit Martina's blog, follow her on Twitter, and definitely check out Sweeter Than Tea!
Martina's Bio - Martina Boone writes fantasy and magical realism for adults and young adults when she isn’t writing web site copy, and resides in Virginia with her family, a therapy dog, two black cats, and as much wildlife as she can coax into taking up residence in the yard.
(Check Out JK Rowling's Newest Release -- Harry Potter and the Cursed Child here!)
So you see, there is world-building even in the world of southern fiction. There is world-building in memorable fiction everywhere. Just find your hooks and use them to weave your story.
****
Susan here - I can't tell you what a thrill I get from seeing myself quoted in the same post as the great Joseph Campbell! :-)
Thanks so much for sharing with us, Martina. And everybody, the few of you who haven't already, be sure to visit Martina's blog, follow her on Twitter, and definitely check out Sweeter Than Tea!
Martina's Bio - Martina Boone writes fantasy and magical realism for adults and young adults when she isn’t writing web site copy, and resides in Virginia with her family, a therapy dog, two black cats, and as much wildlife as she can coax into taking up residence in the yard.
(Check Out JK Rowling's Newest Release -- Harry Potter and the Cursed Child here!)
