I've just updated my Get the Guide Books page to include editorial services.
Several people have contacted me asking to critique their work, but unfortunately my time is extremely limited due to work. However, I much prefer writing, reading, and critiquing whenever possible. :-) Thus, I've added a critique service to my Guide Books page that will allow me to indulge myself in critiquing fabulous manuscripts from wonderful writers while still paying my bills!
I'll offer critiques through e-mail or chat on your queries, synopses, and first chapters that will include both big picture and line item. If you wish to discuss a more in-depth option, just e-mail me at SPSipal AT gmail DOT com.